Wednesday 22 January 2014

More Comments of Our Brave Heroes

So far, sixty-seven children have taken part in the vote for the hero characters to be included in our book. Here are some of the latest comments:

'I like Tigotha's power and I like the way Wowser Women is described.'

'I voted for Turbo the Toddler because it is hilarious and enjoyable. My favourite part was the part where Turbo the Toddler took a bite of the cake and realised he had super powers. But I didn't get why nobody else got a bite because normally everyone gets a bite. But it was still a really good story about a toddler.'

'I choose simon because its a sad story. I choose turbo because he has a funny backstory. I choose Jeff also because I liked the way he was described.'

'I voted for Jeff and Turbo because I thought it might be funny to have a toddler saving the world with a cleaner.'

'I think the friendly lumipoo is a humorous monster and an amazing duck and also his power is awesome!'

'I like Turbo the Toddler's backstory about how he ate a piece of birthday cake that gave him powers! Simon the child is a heart touching story about how his parents get killed by a pack of Lumipoo Momps but its good that he makes a friend with a Tig and both have a wonderful time with each other!'

'I voted for Simon, Super Amazing Wowser Woman and Turbo the Toddler. I chose these three because I have feelings for simon. It must be sad losing both his mum, dad and grandpa. I voted for Super Amazing Wowser Women because I think when I read it I thought the person how wrote that is amazing because it reminded me of my brother - he thinks he is a super hero! And I voted for Turbo the Toddler because having a piece of cake and the next day he woke up with super powers is as funny as a monkey smelling its bum.'

'I chose Bob the Good Lumipoo Momp because I love the description of it and I like how he turned nice. I also love the beginning when the lady thinks he is a boiled egg and it is a bit funny how he likes his milk. Next I chose Simon the Child because he has a sad back story which makes me feel sad and sad for him. However it gets better as it goes along like for example when he meets the tig outside the shop was a nice part and then at the end when he has hope again to kill the lumipoo momp flock and save other people from being killed which is very nice to see he has hope again. Finally, I voted for Turbo the Toddler cause it's an original idea because you don't normally find babies as heroes in books  and I also like how he got his super power.'

'I voted for Jeff the Cleaner, Super Amazing Wowser Woman and Sir Fartalot the Fredanielawrobyus because they have a funny backstory and they are truly a extraordinary characters for the book and also hilarious.'

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