Conflict - Lumipoo Puddles Make People Vanish

 I've just read this conflict and resolution by Ahmad from Bridge School.

Ahmad has created thoroughly chilling conflict - every time somebody steps in a puddle, they just disappear! Apart from Simon and Tigotha, everybody gets eaten.

This is a very powerful conflict and will make our readers feel horrified. They will keep reading until the feeling of horror stops. Well done Ahmad, you created a great hook.

I like the idea of people from Simon's school coming out of the puddle as Simon evaporates the, with his hair dryer.