I'm going to be very busy this weekend, so there will be less feedback than usual. However, I have time to comment on some of the work that came in early.
'Sector the Bad Tubster of Terror has fur that is normally snot green but when she gets infuriated the fur on her back gets coal black and her eyes turn blood red.' - Madeline, St Edward's
I like this idea. Our hero could see Sector and think 'Uh oh!' Then sees Sector's eyes turn blood red and our hero realises that he or she is in serious danger.
'This particular Tubster of Terror's habitat is an oven.' - Madeline, St Edward's
Yikes! I wouldn't like to open my oven and find a tubster in there!
'He only has 2 slimy, sickening , sneaky tentacles, unfortunately the others got chopped off when he was stirring up some more trouble.' - Annabel, St Edwards
This is a good way of distinguishing a particular baddies from the rest of the species.
'They are green with purple spots on them, the DNA made the purple spots have poisonous liquid in them... So be careful when a Tubster of Terror is stressed because that is when he has the ability to squirt!' - Annabel, St Edwards
I can't decide whether this is revolting or funny - possibly both.
'His smell is revolting. Its like rotten tuna smothered in mouldy Stilton cheese and some vile nappies on top!' - Annabel, St Edwards
Nice paying attention to the senses with a truly vile simile. Brilliant.
'Sector the Bad Tubster of Terror has fur that is normally snot green but when she gets infuriated the fur on her back gets coal black and her eyes turn blood red.' - Madeline, St Edward's
I like this idea. Our hero could see Sector and think 'Uh oh!' Then sees Sector's eyes turn blood red and our hero realises that he or she is in serious danger.
'This particular Tubster of Terror's habitat is an oven.' - Madeline, St Edward's
Yikes! I wouldn't like to open my oven and find a tubster in there!
'He only has 2 slimy, sickening , sneaky tentacles, unfortunately the others got chopped off when he was stirring up some more trouble.' - Annabel, St Edwards
This is a good way of distinguishing a particular baddies from the rest of the species.
'They are green with purple spots on them, the DNA made the purple spots have poisonous liquid in them... So be careful when a Tubster of Terror is stressed because that is when he has the ability to squirt!' - Annabel, St Edwards
I can't decide whether this is revolting or funny - possibly both.
'His smell is revolting. Its like rotten tuna smothered in mouldy Stilton cheese and some vile nappies on top!' - Annabel, St Edwards
Nice paying attention to the senses with a truly vile simile. Brilliant.
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