I've just read an interesting example of conflict by Karina from Manor Lodge School.
I have also been wondering how Simon would be able to keep Tigotha when she already has a family of her own. Aside from eating bullies, tigs seem like reasonable people who would get on well with a nice boy like Simon. I look forward to seeing how you resolve this.
Chapter 2
Summary: Simon, Tigotha, Granny Tig
When: day after Sunday last week
Where: Simon’s bedroom
Details: Simon nurses Tigotha back to health and makes Tigotha a bed in the lounge next to the fire. Her bed is made of old socks and Simon lays Tigotha in the bed and as Tigotha falls asleep, Simon sees a small problem. There is a tig at the door, and how exactly is he going to be allowed to keep a baby tig? Uggg!
Chapter 3
Where: still in Simon’s bedroomThe bed in the lounge next to the fire is a nice touch, because it shows how much Simon cares about Tigotha. I think she would like a bed made from old socks.
Details: He answers the door, and sure as pie, there is still a tig at the door. He thought about what you do when you have a tig at your door, but he didn’t remember having heard what to do before. He took a deep breath and opened the door...
I have also been wondering how Simon would be able to keep Tigotha when she already has a family of her own. Aside from eating bullies, tigs seem like reasonable people who would get on well with a nice boy like Simon. I look forward to seeing how you resolve this.
Well done Karina
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Hello writers! Thanks for your comments and thanks for all your help so far.
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I can confirm that there will be a tig at the door.