Friday, 7 February 2014

Conflict - Tig at the Door

I've just read an interesting example of conflict by Karina from Manor Lodge School.
Chapter 2
Summary: Simon, Tigotha, Granny Tig
When: day after Sunday last week
Where: Simon’s bedroom
Details: Simon nurses Tigotha back to health and makes Tigotha a bed in the lounge next to the fire. Her bed is made of old socks and Simon lays Tigotha in the bed and as Tigotha falls asleep, Simon sees a small problem. There is a tig at the door, and how exactly is he going to be allowed to keep a baby tig? Uggg!

Chapter 3
Where: still in Simon’s bedroom
Details: He answers the door, and sure as pie, there is still a tig at the door. He thought about what you do when you have a tig at your door, but he didn’t remember having heard what to do before. He took a deep breath and opened the door...
The bed in the lounge next to the fire is a nice touch, because it shows how much Simon cares about Tigotha. I think she would like a bed made from old socks.

I have also been wondering how Simon would be able to keep Tigotha when she already has a family of her own. Aside from eating bullies, tigs seem like reasonable people who would get on well with a nice boy like Simon. I look forward to seeing how you resolve this.

5 comments:

  1. Well done Karina

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  2. She is my bestie

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  3. I LOVE THIS WEBSITE!!!! I AM ON IT.

    FROM KARINA MLS

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  4. I LOVE THIS WEBSITE IM ALSO ON IT!!!

    FROM CHARLOTTE MLS

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  5. Hello writers! Thanks for your comments and thanks for all your help so far.
    I'm just finishing off the detailed plot and will post it later today.
    I can confirm that there will be a tig at the door.

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