Humaira from Bridge school is the second person to consider a fall out between Simon and Tigotha.
Simon and Tigotha falling out is a good example of conflict that will move our readers, because they know how important the friendship is to Simon. I wrote more on this here.
Don't forget that Simon doesn't have a family.
I like the fact that Humaira writes about Simon putting their differences aside when Tigotha needs help, restoring their friendship.
If Simon rescued Tigotha when they were friends, it would be sweet. But because Simon rescues Tigotha when they're not friends, the ending is extra satisfying. The introduction of conflict made the plot thread especially powerful. Good work Humaira.
Don't forget that Simon doesn't have a family.
I like the fact that Humaira writes about Simon putting their differences aside when Tigotha needs help, restoring their friendship.
If Simon rescued Tigotha when they were friends, it would be sweet. But because Simon rescues Tigotha when they're not friends, the ending is extra satisfying. The introduction of conflict made the plot thread especially powerful. Good work Humaira.
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